Another one from Deception:
Kate opened her eyes to find Luke lying on the other bed, his head propped on one hand, staring at her.
For a moment, in her sleep-addled mind, time seemed to stand still, then rush backward toward happier, more carefree times. To a place where life had been about as perfect as she could have imagined.
What happened to the man she’d fallen in love with? The guy who’d laughed and loved with her? The man she had known would have never killed someone, then run, stealing a car in the process.
Oh, definitely makes me want to know more about him! Great job!
Wow, a lot going on here obviously! Makes me want to delve into finding out everything – terrific six!
Ooh, I like your six. Nice set up with him looking at her, and the memories rushing in.
Drew me right in!! Awesome six! Want more!
Great six. But hey, that’s my hometown on the cover! 🙂
Intriguing six! 🙂
Great cover and mysterious beginning
Awesome 6… drew me in…
You did a great job of showing deja vu and her questions about the present. Great scene.
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