Fire scorched his skin and burned his insides. He tossed one way then the other. His lids fluttered open only to see the bright flames leap at him.
A face appeared before him, stern in its expression, black eyes shuttered. Cool water poured over his body. “Am I in hell?” His voice was rough, his throat raw.
“Nay. Not hell, but close to it.”
Intriguing six, Sharon… I wonder where he is.
Oooh…terrific six Sharon…you have my curious :)
Somewhere not good, that’s for sure! Intriguing, excellent excerpt!
It looks and feels like hell – wonder where he is!
Oooh, I can feel his pain. Such excellent descriptive writing! Great six!
Wow. Intriguing six. Where is he???
fantastic six Sharon, nice one!